Maggie
James is a British author who lives in Bristol. She writes psychological
suspense novels.
The first
draft of her first novel, entitled His Kidnapper’s Shoes, was written whilst
travelling in Bolivia. Maggie was inspired by an impending milestone birthday
along with a healthy dose of annoyance at having procrastinated for so long in
writing a novel. His Kidnapper’s Shoes was published in both paperback and
e-book format in 2013, followed by her second novel, entitled Sister,
Psychopath. Her third novel, Guilty Innocence, like her first two, features her
home city of Bristol. She has recently published her fourth novel, The Second
Captive.
Before
turning her hand to writing, Maggie worked mainly as an accountant, with a
diversion into practising as a nutritional therapist. Diet and health remain
high on her list of interests, along with travel. Accountancy does not, but
then it never did. The urge to pack a bag and go off travelling is always
lurking in the background! When not writing, going to the gym, practising yoga
or travelling, Maggie can be found seeking new four-legged friends to pet;
animals are a lifelong love! Her links are below.
Following is the Prologue of Second Captive.
Copyright
©Maggie James 2014. Used by permission
PROLOGUE
- Beth
Present day
‘Hey, check out that
tart! Can you believe the state of her?’ Sniggers erupt from the two teenage
boys nearby, who nudge each other as they stare at me. I avoid eye contact,
praying they’ll find another source of amusement. Ahead is a pedestrian
crossing, where an elderly woman waits to cross. She’s older, wiser, won’t
judge me. I shuffle towards her.
‘What
a nutter! The bitch has got slippers on!’ The mocking hoots of the teenagers
follow me, straight into the ears of the old woman. Her eyes scrape over my
clothes, grimace at my footwear, before she spots my jogging bottoms, slashed
and dark with my blood. Disapproval tugs the corners of her mouth. I shrink,
chastened, into the doorway of the nearest shop, until she stops staring.
Not that I blame her, or the boys. The cuts
to my knees must look bad. As for my feet, I don’t own any shoes; the
soft pink slippers are my only form of footwear. Wear them, or go barefoot;
that was my choice. The rain started ten minutes after I left the cottage,
rendering my feet cold and wet. Sore, too. The thin leather soles aren’t suitable
for walking the distance I’ve travelled. What must it be, two, perhaps three
miles? The Clock Tower is straight ahead of me, its red brick a distinctive
Kingswood landmark. Past it is The Busy Bean. The coffee shop where life as I
once knew it ended two years ago, when I was eighteen.
The doorway provides shelter; I tell myself
I’ll
move on once the rain isn’t so heavy. The idea of taking an umbrella didn’t
occur to me before leaving the cottage; it was a soft September morning as I
eased myself over the windowsill, the sky a uniform blue. Weather isn’t
something I’ve concerned myself with during the last two years. You might say
I’ve led a sheltered life during that time.
As well as my feet being sore, my calves
ache; I’m
not used to walking so far. Weariness seeps through me, threatening to reduce
me to tears, another humiliation I don’t need. To the casual observer, I must
look weird enough already, what with the fluffy slippers and the bloody knees.
Not to mention the jacket I’m wearing, the sleeves of which are long enough to
cover my hands. It’s Dominic’s jacket. Like shoes, a coat isn’t something I
possess. I’ve not ventured outside the cottage for two years; it’s likely I
never would have again, but the need to find Dominic proved too urgent.
Liar, a small voice in my head chides me.
He’s
not who you need right now. Instead, an image arises in my brain: a woman with
long, dark hair piled on her head in messy disarray, her eyes tender with the
smile they hold, the love in her expression warming me to the soles of my cold,
wet feet.
The rain has eased to no more than a
drizzle. I should move on, but I’m frightened. Everything’s louder, bigger,
brighter, than I remember. My horizons have shrunk to the confines of a damp
basement, and I’m unprepared for how terrifying the outside world is. Were
there always so many cars on the roads? All these people thronging the streets?
A child starts screaming, the sound magnified in my ears. Panic grips me. I
can’t do this.
It’s not too late, I tell myself. Go back to
the cottage; take refuge in the familiarity of the basement. Where mouthy
teenagers can’t mock. Where old women don’t judge.
In my head, the woman with the messy hair
smiles at me again. ‘Come home,’ she says. My panic subsides.
I turn towards The Busy Bean, its heady
coffee aroma meeting me several yards from the open door. The rich caffeine
scent, a smell I’ve not inhaled for a long time, teases my nostrils; I close my
eyes with pleasure. Dominic is a staunch Earl Grey man. And what he drinks, so
do I.

My stomach growls, no doubt alerted by the
coffee and cake smells. In the last thirty-six hours, my only food has been a
hummus sandwich; I need to eat, and quickly.
I turn away, and there, opposite me,
leading off the High Street, is the road towards Downend. I cross towards it.
Saplings are growing along the pavement, their branches sprouting new life. My fingers
trail over the bark of one of them, enjoying its roughness beneath my skin,
such a contrast to the soft foliage above. As I explore, reacquainting myself
with the luxury of doing so, a terrier approaches, sniffing me. I bend down,
allowing myself to stroke its wiry pelt, before yanking my hand away,
remembering. Dogs are dirty, carry disease. Dominic said so.
I start walking again. Every step is a
reminder of my sore feet, my aching calves. I ignore my body and retreat into
my head, my thoughts fixed on my destination. And the reception I’m
likely to face. The reason I’ll give for my two-year absence. My mind spins
back to my parents, to my old family home, which is where I’m heading. The
woman with the messy dark hair is my mother. My father, with his heavy jawline,
his greying hair, his jowly chin betraying the fact he’s going to seed, joins
her in my head. Along with Troy. My brother.
Whatever I say, it won’t
sound convincing. My best bet is to tell them I’ve been staying with friends,
provoked into leaving by my father’s constant nagging. Either
get a job or go to university, Beth, for God’s
sake! The two choices he sees as a fit path for
my future. My mother will be hurt, of course, disappointed by my apparent
selfishness, but better that than revealing the truth. How would I ever find
the words?
One thought has always tortured me. Why no
one found me. Troy must have told my parents what he saw that night. Why wasn’t
it enough for the police - because of course my mother would have called them -
to track me down?
I turn into Draper Street. My eyes fall on
the house where I grew up, where I lived all my life until the age of eighteen.
Before I went missing. Tears mist my vision. My chest grows tight.
I walk towards the door. My fingers rub
against what’s
in the pocket of my jogging bottoms, its small yet solid coolness hard against
my touch.
‘Wish
me luck,’ I tell its former owner.
My hand moves towards the bell, before
stopping. To press my finger against it is an irrevocable action, bringing the
inevitable question: where have you been
for the last two years?
My wet feet, my aching legs, the desperate
hollow in my stomach, leave me no choice. More than that, the yearning to have
my mother’s
arms wrap around me, the warmth of her body pressed against mine, sweeps
through me with tornado-like force. ‘Beth,’ she’ll murmur against my hair.
‘You’ve come home. At last.’
My finger pushes the doorbell, releasing
the familiar one-two ding-dong chimes deep into the belly of the house.
I wait.
Nobody comes.
Anxiety invades my brain, conjuring up
unthinkable scenarios. My family have moved away, abandoned me, leaving me
standing here with my ice-block-cold toes and my empty stomach. Then reason
asserts itself; my mother’s car is in the driveway, the familiar faded
red of the Fiat’s bodywork proof that she, at least, hasn’t exited from my
life. I press the bell again, its chimes a plea for her to come.
Footsteps sound in the hallway, moving
towards the door. It’s solid wood, so I can’t see who’s behind it until it opens.
Teak gives way to space, and to my mother.
I’m home. At last.
Thank you Maggie for sharing this exciting beginning. Readers - watch for Chapters 1 & 2 of the Second Captive in the following months to come.The novel can be purchased at amazon by clicking the following, http://smarturl.it/thesecondcaptive
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Maggie James – author of psychological suspense novels
Website and blog: www.maggiejamesfiction.com
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