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Scribbler is pleased to welcome Anna back. This is her second visit and if you
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Ashley’s
Sense of Place
Readers and critics rarely fail to comment on
the evocative settings in my three Canadian-based crime fiction books. The award-winning writer Melodie Campbell,
for example, says of April on Paris Street (Guernica Editions, December
2021), “the real star of this novel is the city of Paris. Anna Dowdall is
masterful at using all the senses to put you right on the streets of the City
of Lights.“ Just as blushingly, Iona
Whishaw says of the book, “the scrumptious mise en scรจne creates so lush
a feel of Montreal and Paris that it is positively edible.” Lay readers are predictably a little less
breathless, but one Amazon reader’s comment is typical: “a spectacular setting.”
I hope I haven’t lost
you already. Few people read a mystery
primarily for its setting. I’m like any other
reader who wants engaging characters who draw us in, and plots that carry us
forward. And yet, and yet…have you
thought about just how subtly significant setting can be, how it invades everything,
shapes the destiny of characters, informs their actions, and provides a
pervasive point of view on the events taking place that nothing else can?
When, in April on
Paris Street, Montreal private eye Ashley Smeeton falls in love with a
dodgy character she’s met in The Au Pair (Wild Rose Books, 2018),
this is how I describe it: “Two summers
ago, apparently, she’d paid a visit to a strange bank in an unfamiliar part of
the city, and there made an unremembered and sizeable deposit.”
As part of the crime
plot, April on Paris Street takes Ashley deep into the unfamiliar
reaches of eastern Montreal as well as through the underbelly of Paris, before all
preconceptions including hers collapse.
The defamiliarized city, in this way, is educative, both for the reader
and for Ashley. You can’t fully get my tale
of two cities plot, or the progress of its characters, without understanding
this. Montreal and Paris, in their least
known, labyrinthine aspects, are the space through which all must move to get
to where they are going. And in the case
of Ashley in love, for the lightbulb to come on.
For me, setting is an
important fiction writer’s tool, to create atmosphere, to shape, constrain and
comment on events, and to add dimension to character. In crime fiction in particular, it can be
deliciously effective to hint at things, even while the writer must withhold
critical elements. Not that my writing
is driven by such abstractions. When
asked why I invest so heavily in setting, I usually say something like, you can
take the girl out of L.M. Montgomery but you can’t take L.M. Montgomery out of
the girl. In other words, that’s just
the kind of writer I am. I like to
create a detailed and atmospheric world, and lose myself in it.
But enough about me and my obsession. Even more readers than comment on the sense of place in my books comment on twenty-something Ashley herself. She’s a mixture of potentially irreconcilable elements, an underdog and a working class heroine. She’s an everywoman to bond with, but whose profoundest feelings are sometimes a little mysterious. Despite or perhaps because of this, readers characterize her as highly likeable, even “utterly winning.” Beginning with my first book, After the Winter (Wild Rose Books, 2017), in which Ashley, a child living in time-warp rural Quebec, appears as an important secondary character, the reader learns about Ashley through her context.
Aged nine, she’s an
odd little duck, a loner who already sees the world as a Nancy Drew story. She is half-Abenaki through a dead father;
her mother struggles. She is friends
with a twelve-year-old, justice-dispensing ghost who haunts a swamp near her
home. In The Au Pair, having in
the meantime highjacked my authorial purpose and taken over as protagonist, she
reappears as an adult private eye living in Montreal. We can see that she’s made something of
herself: she’s now the pal of cops, with
an intuitive crime radar, awkwardly elegant but still Ashley—one foot in and
one foot out of the everyday social world represented by the big city.
In April on Paris
Street, finding myself with a part Indigenous character and no longer
knowing quite how I should approach this, I took the plunge and had her
reconnect with her Abenaki relatives, from whom the Smeetons have been
estranged. The subplot links to the
novel’s exploration of a world that I characterize as divided, split, fractured—dual
in various ways. For Ashley, though, this
duality of hers is central. The reader
can decide at the end what her reconciliation might mean for her. It’s certainly not something I can pronounce
on.
The point I want to
make though is that this critical character dimension arises directly out of
the historically-inflected space around Ashley, not just the space she’s in but
the space from which she came. Now I’m
going to mention the Russian critic Mikhail Bakhtin, so please forgive me. He coined a term: chronotope. He was looking for a category to described
literary space that is fundamentally defined by the instability of time. If you really want to grasp the complicating impact
of setting as something more than inert backdrop, think of it as holding just
under its surface the restless flow of history.
A world—just like the world of crime fiction, in fact!—where narrative
sequence is non-linear and where rival truths have a tendency to erupt from the
time before and interfere with the present.
Where Ashley is
concerned, there are multiple temporal layers to her unique setting. There are the mean streets of two modern
cities that conceal and reveal, the precipitating crime being the moment when
that clock begins to tick. There’s
Ashley’s personal past, her family life, the relatives she knows and those she
comes to know. And there’s the
compressed historical setting, which is still
intensely personal to Ashley’s identity.
Taking this approach to setting, we can therefore
think of Ashley and her setting differently. She was born in an imaginary town
in the Eastern Townships, and by book three is a well-established resident of
Montreal’s Pointe St-Charles. But her
personal place, the place that takes form in the books as she moves through
them, is about 10,000 years deep.
So there you have it: come for the setting but stay for Ashley. Probably like you, I can only accompany her part way on her journey through her own unique space. But, even where I can’t follow her, I find it’s instructive.
Thank you, Anna, for
your guest post. Wishing you continued success.
Please
visit Anna’s website - www.annadowdall.com
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