Sunday, 16 August 2020

The Assaulters! Returning Author Ann Knight of Ottawa, ON.

 

 









We are most fortunate to have Ann back again.



This is Ann’s third visit to the Scribbler. Her first visit in 2016, she shared her creative story – The Raft. GO HERE Her second visit in 2018, Ann chatted with us about writing and shared an excerpt from her novel – Nightshade. GO HERE. 

This week, she has kindly agreed to a 4Q Interview and is sharing an excerpt from her latest work – The Assaulters.


 

Author of six books: Battlefield, The Rising, Midnight Peak, The Rubix, Nightshade, and The Assaulters; three screenplays: The Gold Dust Circle, The Assaulters, and Holiday Spice; and one short story The Raft. Early start in choreography and stage production.



 

4Q: Welcome back Ann. Lots of incredible things happening with your writing. Let’s dive right in and talk about The Assaulters. What can you tell us about it?



 

AK: Thank you for having me back on the Scribbler. 


The Assaulters is a psychological drama about a social experiment that goes wrong after a member of an underground group defects—and focuses his need for violent revenge on the remaining members—taking ‘assault’ to a whole new level. 

By day, psychologist Sam Blake helps assess and treat mental, emotional, and behavioral disorders; but by night, he sends his followers out on the streets to carry out specific acts of violence. Tired of waiting for ‘ideal’ patients to walk through his door, he takes it upon himself to encourage setups that will ultimately lead to more opportunities—chance occasions that will allow him to delve into the mind post-trauma. Dr. Blake wants to get inside their heads and discover just how resilient their minds are. His goal is simple: shock the victim and study the pliability of human character after suffering has taken place. His underground club becomes an outlet for men filled with angst and overrun with testosterone—easy pawns to manipulate.  

Meanwhile, Sam’s personal life is not without problems. His wife’s repeated miscarriages are cause for concern, and her obsession to have a child add insult to injury. The cracks in their seemingly ‘perfect’ marriage begin to deepen. Ed is Sam’s closest friend, and an anchor through it all—a wise advisor and loyal accomplice. He tags along as the journey takes them deep into the nature of relationships, trauma, and loss. 

When Sam rejects an unstable young man from the club for taking an act of violence too far; he inadvertently becomes the object of a twisted game of revenge. A victim of the group’s attacks ends up in Sam’s office giving him the break he has been waiting for. But everyone who gets close to Sam becomes a target; his wife, his best friend, his club members, and his new client… No one is safe from the malicious criminal who has made it his mission to hurt that which has hurt him. 


  

 

4Q: What inspired this story?


 

AK: The story evolved from the idea that sometimes human beings experience tremendous pain and suffering and still find a way to move forward and reinvent themselves against all odds. Post-traumatic growth versus post-traumatic stress. In the same way, some minds don’t bounce back after trauma and the antagonist helps bring that to light. The Assaulters was originally a screenplay. I decided to write the book a year later. The story explores many themes such as love, loyalty, friendship, betrayal, and revenge.  

 

 



 

4Q: Please share a childhood memory and/or anecdote.

 

 

AK: I remember the moment I caught the writing bug; I was fifteen years old—and in my high school graduating year. I was the youngest admitted to the screenwriting program the next year, and I had worked hard to sharpen my skills as a scriptwriter… and then tragedy struck—and 39 scripts were gone in the blink of an eye. From that day forward, I believed that my writing career was over. Eight years passed before I considered returning to the craft. I had a recurring dream—it would not go away until I wrote it down. In doing that, I gave the story a voice. Battlefield (my first book) was the result of that dream. I am reminded of the quote by Nicole Reed, ‘Sometimes the bad things that happen in our lives put us directly on the path to the best things that will ever happen to us’.

 

 

 

4Q: On your previous visit, we enjoyed an Excerpt from Nightshade. One of the three books in The Rising Series. Can you tell us about the series?

 

 

AK: Imagine living in a world free of disease, obesity, poverty, and murder—a perfectly crafted world order led by one family. The cost—freedom of choice. Genetics decide your diet, career path, and compatible partner. Rebel alliances are formed, but those who oppose the new system of control are forced into hiding. Children begin their training at a young age—future soldiers to serve the new world leaders. If the rebels hope to overthrow the family in power and restore their rights, the youth are their only hope.      

And the story begins with The Rising:


Being at a medium-security training center high up in the mountains means that there is a slight margin for things like… sneaking out of dorm rooms after lights out. That’s what Rachel does to go meet Leo, her annoying, yet devilishly handsome pain-in-the-rear friend. He makes her life difficult and enjoys every minute of it. Leo always manages to get under her skin, but it doesn’t matter because they are drawn to each other like a moth to a flame, and they love to push each other’s limits.

She has everyone fooled. It was the only way to get ‘inside’ and become part of the elite. She is the daughter of the resistance—their greatest threat. They raised her, trained her, and made her the best. Rachel knows that if her secret identity gets out it will endanger the lives of the people she cares about. This game of deceit takes its toll, but she has no choice other than to slam shut her emotional window and avoid attachments at all costs.

The rebels have people on the inside watching over Rachel. Getting through the finals, she spends a weekend with her supposed father—the Chief. During the visit, she meets Matt, a detective who captures not only her interest, but also her heart. Is a rebel supposed to fall in love? What will this mean to her mission? The internal conflict rages as she continues to deceive her peers.

To make matters far worse, Rachel attracts the interest of the youngest Rothwell heir; son of the world leader. Johnny is strong, powerful, and he represents an opportunity—an irresistible chance to sway the scales and help her family out of hiding. They made her smart, strong, and resilient. All she has to do is play a part, and she's already done that for most of her life. But little does Rachel realize that she is entering a web so thick and impenetrable; she may not be able to find her way out of it. Being on the arm of a Rothwell will come at a price—one that she is not entirely ready for... 

The adventure continues with Midnight Peak:

On assignment under the watchful eye of her acting father, the Chief of law enforcement, Rachel continues to gather precious Intel for her family in hiding. When Johnny returns, so does the responsibility of playing an affectionate lover. Being with Johnny means she can’t be with Matt—the only man who has truly won her heart. Remaining focused on her mission proves impossible when a favor from the past suddenly comes back to hurt her. A rebel trades a secret for the release of his pregnant wife, endangering Rachel’s life, and complicating an already difficult situation.


With his father’s health deteriorating, Johnny is destined to become the new world leader. The young heir has a lust for power unlike any Rachel has ever encountered, and he’ll need to secure a wife if he hopes to rob his older brother of his birthright. A union with Johnny means that Rachel will never be free.

Rachel has to face all of her fears; she has to dig deep down and find the strength to persevere or they will crush her. Struggling to overcome everyone else’s expectations of her—what they want for her life—who they want her to be—the truth finally sinks in. She’s not just a rebel’s daughter. She’s not Johnny’s puppet. She’s a soldier. They can beat her to her knees, but she won’t stay there. She’s going to unravel the secrets and dismantle this system of control or die trying.

Nightshade is the third book in this series, and previously featured on the Scribbler.

 

 

 

4Q: Favorite authors? Novels?

 

 

AK: Tough question! I enjoy the way authors lure me into their worlds, and I fall for certain ‘baiting’ and techniques but… it is too difficult to choose one that I prefer over the rest.

My favorite books include: Love Anthony, by Lisa Genova; Charlie St. Cloud, by Ben Sherwood, and The Cuckoo’s Calling, by J.K. Rowling.   



 

 

4Q: What’s next for Ann Knight, the author?


 

AK: I am entering uncharted territory with my newest project; a ghost story with an uncommon twist. An upcoming fourth installment to The Rising series is pending. A sequel for my first book, Battlefield, is in the initial stages of the writing process, and a prequel for The Rubix is also in consideration.

 


 

 

4Q: Anything else you’d like to share with us?

 

AK: In addition to writing, I have been coaching first time authors since 2019 (writers can contact by email: annknightfiction@gmail.com). Writers have great ideas but at times struggle with tone, flow, and other challenges. It is difficult to unearth answers when we dig alone. Sharing our answers can help others find theirs. 

 

 

 

 

An Excerpt from The Assaulters.

(Copyright is held by the author. Used with permission)

 

 

 

The dreaded morning commute wasn’t something most people enjoyed. The city bus was crowded, as usual. A man folded the newspaper he was reading and placed it on the empty seat next to him. The headline was bold and in all caps: ASSAULTERS ATTACK AGAIN, 2 MORE VICTIMS.

The man scratched at his shaggy beard, his bloodshot eyes warily taking in the other passengers. His pudgy cheeks were riddled with broken capillaries. His construction boots were unlaced, his pants worn at the knees, and the bottom hem of his plaid shirt was torn in a few places. He carried the burden of life on his shoulders. The bus stopped and the man followed the line of other exiting passengers to the door. Outside, he squinted against the bright light that affronted his vision. Busy bodies all went their separate ways. The stocky man stopped by the bus shelter and lit a smoke. He pulled out his cell phone and dialed a number.

“Hey it’s Troy,” he said after Rory picked up. “I’m here.” He looked across the street at the Asian Appetite. “Alright I’ll meet you there.” He ended the call and took another long drag. Rubbing out the fairly new cigarette on the aluminum shelter framing, he placed it back in his pocket and walked towards the restaurant with an air of distrust in his expression.

Troy waited for twenty minutes for Rory to show. Sitting at the small round table, he fiddled with the chopsticks until his wife’s younger cousin joined him.

“You look like crap,” Troy started, “like usual.”            

“Buy me lunch man, I’m hungry.” Rory sat back in the chair, his dark eyes somehow becoming magnets of empathy.

“Sure,” Troy told him. They ordered and then skipped the small talk.

“So why did you get mixed up in all this?” Rory asked him.

“What do you mean?” Troy frowned.

“I mean, does my cousin know that you’ve enrolled in the criminal fists unit that has fun after dark?”

Troy picked out the sarcasm in Rory’s tone, but it still irritated him. “No—hey Rory I have four mouths to feed and another on the way. I don’t need you coming here and hassling me—”

“Whoa,” Rory stopped him, “hold on. Just you hold on a minute cousin. No one forced you to join the night crawlers.”

Troy exhaled. “What do you want?”

“Matt Mulligan,” Rory said. “Do you think that’s his real name?”

“I don’t know,” Troy answered. “All I know is I want out now.”

Rory leaned forward. “Not yet you don’t. I need you in there. I’m gonna take him down. I want him to lose everything he has—starting with his messed-up underground group.”

Troy slid his elbows across the small table, bridging the gap between them. He kept his voice hushed. “No. Just leave it alone. There’s too many of them Rory. It’s crazy. Let it go.”

“Let it go?” Rory’s face reddened. “Would you let it go? They kicked the crap out of me and dumped me in the middle of the highway.”

Troy’s palms came up. “Walk away from it. It’s easy.”

Rory’s fist came down on the table. “You’re not listening to me.”

They straightened in their seats as the server placed their orders on the table and left. Rory wasted no time digging in. He hadn’t eaten all day. He was between jobs and between places to crash.

“Where are you living these days?” Troy asked.

Rory didn’t look up from his food. “Nowhere.”

“Nowhere?” Troy’s brows scrunched together. “Are you homeless?”

“I’m not one of your kids. Mind your damn business,” Rory grated.

Troy looked down at the plate in front of him. Thai was his favorite, but he didn’t like to eat at restaurants. Today he was paying for two meals and his wife would wonder who he was meeting for lunch. She counted every dollar he made. Frowning, he took the fork and dug in without another word.

“Thanks for lunch.” Rory covered his mouth and stifled a belch.

Troy finished his last bite and looked around. Most of the tables were taken now. “I have to get back.”

“My car,” Rory said, his eyes darkening. “That’s where I’m living.” He stood and balanced his fist on the edge of the table. “I need you to give me the inside scoop on the meetings—on Matt.”

“You know I can’t,” Troy started.

“You should think it over, you know, for your kids. For my cousin. You don’t want them involved in this.”

Troy’s chest tightened at the words. He didn’t know how far Rory was willing to take this, but he could judge that it was pretty far. “Alright.”

Rory turned to leave. Troy picked up on the fact that Rory walked with a bit of a limp. He wondered what Matt’s group had done to the poor kid. He knew Mick and Andrei, the two men who acted as the club’s bouncers. They would have let Rory have it—they would have beaten him without mercy. Though his wife’s cousin deserved a good pounding, no one deserved to be outnumbered by two big fighters and then dumped on a highway like roadkill. Troy hung his head. What the hell had he done? He had four little kids and a good woman to go home to. Somewhere along the way it hadn’t been enough. Life lacked adventure, adrenaline rushes, and midnight escapes. The enticement of the secret group had been too good to pass up, and now he was in too deep to turn back.

 

Amanda folded her hands in her lap. She waited for Sam to review his notes from their last sessions. The leather chaise seemed less giving today and she felt stiff, uncomfortable.

“How are you feeling?” Sam asked.

“Umm,” Amanda inhaled. “Good, I guess.”

Sam looked up from his notes and read her body language. She wasn’t as relaxed as the last time. He wondered if it was due to the fact that they were meeting after hours, after everyone else in the building had gone home. Her shoulders were tight and a bit forward. She averted his gaze, and her hair was down, hiding most of her face.

“How many times did your mind replay the attack today?” he asked.

She swallowed and turned her hands over in her lap nervously. “Like a dozen times,” her voice was a barely louder than a whisper.

Sam nodded. “Is that pretty regular?”

Her eyes watered. He took that as a yes. “The reason I’m offering these late sessions, Amanda, is because I think that you are making great progress and I would hate for that to change.”

Her shoulders eased back into their natural place. It dawned on him then that she was suggestable. He knew how to manipulate a mind like that—to open it, shape it, sculpt it like clay and make it strong again.

“We’re going to find the key to your healing,” he said, “and you will use it to unlock your future.”

Her lips twitched; she almost smiled. The words healing and future in the same sentence were homey, reassuring. She was really starting to like this man in front of her. It was his approach. He didn’t talk at her like the other therapists had done. He talked with her. She felt like she still had one hand on the wheel when she was here. He stood and walked around the desk, telling her something, but she only heard a muffled sound. Her attention was on his features. Amanda couldn’t help but study him as though he were the subject, and she the researcher. His hair was dark blond with a tinge of red, and was getting a bit long on top. It naturally curled which would seem like nothing short of an annoyance for a man, but it did him well. Blue eyes were perfectly set beneath thick eyebrows and a straight nose. His skin looked like it tanned easily; there was a sun-kissed shade to it even now, this late into fall. She tilted her head, following the contour of his chin.

His throat cleared. “Amanda?”

She snapped back to reality, realizing to her embarrassment that her jaw had dropped open. “I didn’t hear the question,” she mumbled, regaining her composure. Her cheeks felt hot.

He smiled. “I didn’t ask a question.” He wondered what she had been thinking moments ago. “I want you to notice what it feels like in your body when the trauma emotions rise up. I don’t want you to suppress anything that wants to be felt.”

“But,” Amanda looked down at her hands. “Isn’t the whole point of this to make sure I don’t relive what happened?”

“The only way past trauma is to go through it not over it. Ignoring what took place won’t bring you out of it. It won’t empower you in any way to play victim.” In response to the desolate look on her face, he added, “I know you were a victim and I am not taking that away from you. I am only suggesting that you don’t have to be a victim for the rest of your life.”

She took a deep breath and sunk back into the cushions. She felt like making herself more comfortable. Sam watched the change in her demeanor, in her posture. The subtleties pleased him to no end. The way the mind triggered the body and vice versa. Amanda turned and placed her feet up on the chaise, leaning back into the headrest. “I hate what happened. I hate what they did to me. I don’t want to forget it happened. It makes me so angry inside that I couldn’t fight back.”

Sam listened. She was so different. “Trauma is complex. It rewires the brain. The good news is that we can change the wiring as many times as we want. It just takes work.”

Amanda pondered that. Her idea of life had certainly changed after the attack. The world had become so bleak, so negative. She needed a new outlook, a new way of thinking.

“If you can trust me,” Sam’s voice was level, as was his gaze. “We can do this work together. You won’t be doing this alone, I’m here to support you every step of the way. But you need to trust me.”

No other professional had spoken to her of trust. Not one. They expected her to be responsive, to be a robot, in a sense. They didn’t want to understand her or take the time needed to rebuild her. She glanced over at the notepad on the desk. Sam hadn’t taken any notes during their session. He had been more interested in her, and somehow this left an impression. The sessions with Dr. Blake started just a few weeks ago, and they were already making a world of difference. It was stupid to think that someone who was banking on her presence every week actually cared about her, but she could tell he did.

 

 

 

 

Thank you, Ann, for being our special guest this week. Wishing you continued success with your writing.

 

Much appreciated, and always a pleasure!

 

For all you awesome visitors wanting to discover more about Ann and her books, please follow these links:

https://www.annknightfiction.com/


Saturday, 8 August 2020

In the Abyss. An award wining short story by Allan Hudson

 




In the Spring of 2020, my short story - In the Abyss - received Honourable Mention in the Writers Federation of NB's short story competition. 


I'm grateful for the award and want to share the story with you this week.


Honourable Mentionan award or special praise given to someone who has done something extremely well but who has not won any of the official prizes


For the longest time, the idea for this story, floated around in my head with no place to land until I was invited to participate in a writer's workshop one fine day in Shediac. I was invited by Zev Bagel, one of NB's creative chaps and fine storyteller. Surrounded by other creative minds and wonderful support, the words flowed... and this is the result. 




Into the Abyss

 

What is there left to be discovered? In our moments of curiosity, perhaps there are a few stones that should be left unturned.

 

Julius Castor – Jules to most – is at the local library. He’s adjusting his black-framed bifocals as he scans the titles of the travel books, a row of confusion, looking for Hiking Trails of New Brunswick. A co-worker had mentioned it after she heard about his plans to take a long weekend. He had decided to dig out his backpack and camping gear and spend three days off in the wilderness by himself. He’d been looking forward to this for the last two weeks. He needs the time away. But the joy over his upcoming excursion is balanced by his frustration at being unable to decide where to go.


His girlfriend has broken up with him a month ago. It had been totally unexpected. They’d been dating since they graduated high school together, six years ago. Out of the blue, she told him she was moving to India to head up the new call center their company was opening. He was offered an opportunity to go too, but India held as much appeal to him as having his toenails removed with a pair of pliers. So he had lost his job as well as his girl. On top of that, his faithful companion, Charlie the cat, passed away, and now, a month later, the once-lanky Jules is fifteen pounds heavier from stuffing his mouth with chocolate due to bouts of depression. A weekend of solitude is what he needs. Just him and the birds, and the trees and whatever else he finds. What he really wants is to drop this dead funk that is pestering him.


As he browses the shelves, he takes a deep breath. He loves the smell of books: the aging paper, the bold odor of ink. It’s why he had studied literature in college. Which is why he works at a call centre. At one time he had hoped to teach English but after being a supply teacher for a short time, the unruliness of the seventh graders made him change his mind. He’s too sensitive to be bossy and dish out punishment.

Some books have shiny spines; others are dull and unreadable. Some have bold letters that yell out their title; others have print so small they might as well be in another language. Jules scratches his head, mussing up his wavy hair. He’s been back and forth several times over this aisle where the librarian had told him he would find what he’s searching for. And he can’t find it. Seeing her at the end of the aisle, he calls out to her in a too-loud voice and she interrupts his query with a finger to her lips and the compulsory, Shhhh! Then she walks down the aisle and stops several feet away. Her eyeglasses hang on a silver chain around her neck and she replaces them on her wizened face, she reminds him of his grandmother. Moving a couple of books around, she finds the title he’s looking for. He’s impressed with her memory. Both for the title he had given her earlier and for the book’s location. It’s not exactly the latest best-seller. A bit shorter than him, she has to look up at him when she passes it to him and whispers,

“There you are, young man. Going on a hike, are you?”

Jules only nods and his round cheeks redden a bit. He’d passed that spot at least three times and never noticed the book. She leaves with a small wave and a half smile.

“Don’t get lost.”

Heading to a nearby table, he scans the pages, flipping them like a fan. In doing so, a paper falls to the floor. He kneels to pick it up. It’s folded in quarters, and when he opens it, a corner crumbles and pieces fall to the floor like confetti. Realizing it’s very old, he handles it gently. Sitting at a plain wooden table – the kind that are popular at church halls and cafeterias and, obviously, libraries – he unfolds the paper as delicately as possible. The overall color is sepia, with edges frayed or broken. The creases where it’s been folded are worn, proclaiming the many times it’s been opened and closed. The lower left corner states that it was once the property of the Albert County Coal Mining Company.


It’s a topographical map, with dark brown highlights and lines twisting and turning ophidian-like. Glancing at the legend at the bottom, Jules sees that the scale is one inch to one thousand feet. The thickest line ends near a mountaintop and has a star at the terminus. A small lake is depicted nearby. It looks familiar, but he thinks that’s unlikely.

The weirdest part is the picture of a woman in an oval frame in the bottom right corner. It looks like it’s not meant to be there – as if it was added later on. Only the head and shoulders are visible. She is staring at something to the right of the photographer. The eyes are dominant, wide and shaded by fear. The non-smiling mouth makes him think of the Mona Lisa. From the hairstyle, headband and clothing, Jules thinks the picture might be from the 1970s because it reminds him of photos he’s seen of his mother when she was younger. But checking the legend, he notices the date: July 26, 1902. The hairs stand up on the back of his neck. Today is July 26, 2002. A hundred years to the day.

The coincidence of the dates is not lost on him. He senses the map is telling him where he should go. Bending to study the details more closely, he sees why it looks familiar – he recognizes the jagged coastline he’s followed so many times. It’s the Bay of Fundy, and this is the old mining trail now situated in Fundy National Park. The lake stumps him, though. To confirm his suspicion, he opens the hiking book to the proper section and traces the trail to find that he is correct. He can see how the roads line up with the topography of the terrain. They have to be the same. Only, in the book, the lake is not there. That settles it. He’s going to go find the lake on the map.

Looking around casually, he sees no one is watching him. He carefully refolds the map, places it between the pages of his own notebook, and returns the book to the shelves. He’s not a thief, but he feels compelled to take it with him. A pang of guilt makes him feel like a bandit though. So, he stops at Don’s Printing Service to have a copy made of the map and then he returns it.  He stops at the grocery store for some nuts and berries, oatmeal and raisins. Back home, he makes his own gorp. Once that was done, he packs and is ready to leave first thing in the morning.

Next day by noon, Jules is sweating profusely in the midday heat. A red polka-dotted handkerchief is tied around his head. Clad in new hiking boots, which he curses because they’ve made a blister on the back of his heel, rugged walking shorts and a black T-shirt, damp with his perspiration, that says Kindness is Contagious in white letters, he’s leaning back on a gnarled and knotty birch tree, trying to catch his breath. Normally he’d be stopping more often, but an inner urge propels him to find this lake. Breathing deeply through his nose, he smiles at the aroma the forest offers: the decaying leaves, the scent of pine sap, the pleasant rot of dead wood. Checking his watch, he estimates another hour before he’s there. Taking the bag of trail mix from his pack, he gnaws on the contents to satisfy his hunger pangs and carries on. Birds cavort overhead, trilling their love songs or warnings into the emptiness. Crows caw at his intrusion. Small animals enter the path and are startled by the presence of a strange biped. All of it has a calming effect on him, but some of his troubles still nag at him like the blister on his heel.


The last section of the trail is like a tunnel. Fingers of maple, poplar and oak stretch overhead from both sides, toying with each other to create a living canopy. The path is dappled from the slivers of the sun that penetrate the thick foliage. As Jules crests the last rise, the tunnel opens to a clearing overgrown with long grasses and young shoots. Jules escapes the shadows and their cool caress and walks into the sunlight, relishing the warmth. But there’s no lake. He checks the map, certain he’ll see a sign that says, “You are here.” Disappointment causes him to frown. Tired now, he decides to rest for a bit and make a more substantial lunch later. Dropping his backpack, he leans it against a fallen tree covered with moss and forest debris. Sitting on the ground beside it, he leans his head back and closes his eyes, meaning to momentarily bask in the sun’s golden glow before eating. Fatigue is greater than hunger and he falls asleep.

Waking to the sound a coyote howling in the distance, he squints at the sun, which seems to be in the same spot in the clear sky as when he fell asleep. Rubbing his eyes, he tries to focus, but all he sees are sepia tones. The tree he was leaning on is gone. He’s lying on the grass and his backpack has fallen over. The clearing is much larger; the trees nearest him, much younger. He sits up and shakes his head, thinking he’s still asleep and dreaming, but nothing changes. Wiping the sleep from the corner of his eyes, the reality of the setting unsettles him. Goosebumps pepper his flesh; his heart pounds in his chest. This is not where he fell asleep. Nothing is the same. Even the tunnel he had emerged from earlier is not yet formed; the limbs have not reached each other. He thinks out loud:

“This is strange. I have to be dreaming.”

Pinching his leg, he feels the pain; he must be awake. A need to urinate gets him moving. While relieving himself, he keeps looking over his shoulder, eyes darting at any suspected or imagined movement. Things are the same, but not the same. Why can’t he see other colors? It’s like looking at the map. He spies another path, partially hidden by the branches of a young sycamore tree. He stares, trying to recall if it was there before but can’t remember. Wandering over to the trail, he’s surprised to see it is well worn. Checking that his pack is still where he left it, he hesitates. Something nags at him to stay put. An eerie feeling comes over him as if he won’t like what he finds. Yet the urge to see where it leads is compelling. Something beckons. Against his better judgement, he pushes the young tree aside and cautiously enters the track.


The path is mostly downhill, the walking easy. He keeps rubbing his eyes, hoping to clear the sepia tones. After a few minutes, he follows a bend and a lake is soon visible. He thinks it’s the one in the old map. At first all he sees is the blinding sparkle of the sun glistening off the dimpled surface. Approaching the end of the trail, to his surprise, colors slowly return to the surroundings. The fear he initially felt dissipates, and the jitters leave his body. The white and brown boles of the large trees are the only break from the verdant splendor of leaves and grass. The lake is as blue as the cloudless sky. With the heat pressing down on him, a body of water has never been so inviting. It calls to him, a voice in his head, soft and mellow, urging him in.

The sun grows hotter, his clothes cling to him. He looks around and feels foolish for doing so. He doubts there is anyone about. Removing all his clothes, even his underwear, he wades into the cool, refreshing water. The bottom is silty, and soft mud squishes between his toes. He craves to go deeper but is nervous of swimming alone. Almost up to his neck in the water, a peace comes over him that is unexplainable, an intense sensation, like an orgasm or that first hit of marijuana, the consciousness of mouthwatering chocolate. He forgets everything that has been troubling him and a singsong voice startles him.

“Come in. Come deeper. Let me hold you.”

The tone is mother-like, melodious and tender. He looks around – three hundred and sixty degrees – but sees no one. Pushing himself off the bottom, he dives in and goes deep, maybe ten to fifteen feet down. Looking up, he sees rays slice the surface and marvels at the sunlight refracting in the water, like a curtain slowly opening. He needs to breathe, but before he propels himself upward, he glances to the depths and sees what looks like a porcelain arm waving to him. Thinking it some kind of fish he resurfaces and notices that the sun has settled in the west, as if several hours have passed since he dove in. But that’s not possible. Is it?



Looking east, he sees dark billowing clouds roar through the sky like steam engines. An overwhelming urgency compels him to set his tent up before dark, gather some wood for a fire. He paddles toward shore, but it doesn’t come closer. He’s pushing with his arms and kicking, but he’s not going anywhere. Turning on his back to rest, he feels something grasp his leg, like a hand, and a penetrating fear engulfs him. Just before it pulls him under, he gulps in a large breath. Down he goes. He’s fighting the downward pull until the voice comes back, soothing, beckoning.

“Relax. Give in to the depths.”

Mesmerized, he gives up his struggle. Mere seconds later, he’s staring at a porcelain statue covered with algae. He realizes it is the body of a woman. His struggle has disturbed the sediment in the water and visibility is poor. His lungs burn; he needs to breathe. As he stares at the figure, the face becomes clear. He screams silently into the water. It’s the woman in the picture on the map.

 

 

July 26, 2027

 

Debbie Foster is at the local library. She and two friends are visiting from Ontario and want to go hiking while they’re vacationing in New Brunswick. The librarian leads her to the travel section and digs out a copy of Hiking Trails in New Brunswick. Debbie thanks her, and waits until the lady returns to her desk to flip through the pages. Halfway through, a map falls out on the floor. The first thing Debbie notices when she opens it is the odd sepia color. On the bottom, looking out of place, is a photo of a young man with round cheeks, wavy hair and black glasses.







Thank you for visiting today. I hope you enjoyed the story. Would love to hear your comments.





Saturday, 1 August 2020

New Brunswick Author, James A Shaw.

 

 




Jim Shaw is the author of The Secrets of the Damned series and has a new book in the works of a different series. We met through JJ Carrier’s FB page – New Brunswick Independent Author’s Association. Jim is an active member of the group and we are fortunate to have him as our guest this week.

He has agreed to a 4Q Interview and is sharing as Excerpt from A Father’s Legacy. 

 

 

I have been penning my lies for over thirty years now. I live in Woodstock, New Brunswick, which is in Atlantic Canada. My first series is Secrets of the Damned, and it is based exclusively in small town New Brunswick. My second series, The Legends of the Seventh One, is set somewhere else, in a galaxy torn by war. I have a passion of the written word that I inherited from my Mother, combined with the keen imagination I inherited from my Dad. My books have been sold as far away as Europe and even in Iraq.




 

4Q: Lets talk about The Secrets of the Damned. Vampires and other scary things. Tell us briefly about the series.



 

JS: Secrets of the Damned is very near and dear to my heart. It is my first series that will eventually consist of three novels and one spin off. Here is a fun little jimfact, SOTD started out as a creative writing project. While attending NBCC Woodstock in 1987, in English class, we were asked to write a story, any story we wanted, so long as it met all the stipulations in the guidelines. So, we got the assignment on a Friday, and I went home and wrote it over the weekend. The actual story I wrote was the intro to the second Secrets of the Damned novel, Forbidden Dreams. 



It was about a couple boys out late at night investigating a notorious haunted house. In this ‘story’ the mansion was as much a character as the two boys creeping around in the shadows as they explore the old house. It was about twenty pages and I thought that was the end of it. So, on the following Friday, we all were instructed to pass our stories around for everyone else in class to read. We were all to write our thoughts and comments on the bottom of the stories. The most consistent comments I was getting was in the form of questions asking me where the rest of the story was. I thought that was odd because I really thought what I had written was complete. But I obliged my classmates and started writing a chapter a week. Of course, the story has changed and mutated several times from those early drafts, to the finished story that you can get today either on Kindle, Audible, or hardcopy on Amazon.  The stories I had envisioned were three in number, each about a vampire, the damned, each having a secret they protected at all cost. Around that kernel I wrapped the human stories. They are very much stories written inside larger stories, kind of like a smile hidden inside a frown. Eclipse fans beware my vampires do not sparkle, and they do not fall in love with their food. If you do buy them, you are in for a fun roller coaster of a ride, and you never quite know what will happen next. Promise.

 

 

 

4Q: What draws you to this genre of writing and reading?


 

JS: Who doesn’t like a good scare every now and again? I sure do, yet there is one thing common to all the genres I write in, which is freedom. The over the top genres, like Thrillers, Sci-Fi and Fantasy offer the writer a wide latitude to explore the big questions we as humans often must face over the course of our lifetimes. Now, do not misunderstand me, I am not trying to sound smug. I am not offering the readers of my books any profound knowledge that will lead you to nirvana. Nothing that grand, the ‘big’ questions I explore are questions I sometimes have wrestled with or more to the point questions my characters are struggling with and need my help to explore them more fully and completely. For example, in, A Father’s Legacy, first book in the new series, one of the main characters Marcus, struggles with who he feels he is and who everyone expects him to be. All his life he has been told of the great deeds he will accomplish, and ultimately how he alone will save the galaxy. Yet in his heart of hearts he does not feel worthy or capable of any of it. We the readers get to follow along as he navigates his world in search of who he really is.

 

 

 

4Q: Every new guest on the Scribbler gets asked this question. Please share a childhood memory and/or anecdote.

 

 

JS: Well the first thing that comes to mind, is kind of a circle. When Star Wars, Empire and Jedi first came to the big screen, my sister took me to all of them. Then when Mr. Lucas brought those movies back to the big screen as ‘special editions’ I took her children to them. It is kind of the Sci-Fi circle of life so to speak.

 

 

 

4Q: Your first book in your new Legends of the Seven Sons series is on the shelves now. Titled A Father’s Legacy. What can we expect when we pick up a copy?

 



 

JS: Well this new series is a departure from the Secrets of the Damned, and I have pivoted from writing Thrillers to Sci-Fi. They both still have a healthy does of Fantasy mixed into them, guess it would not be me if they did not. It is defiantly a series, and by that, I mean it has always been one huge expansive story meant to be told over the span of several novels.  It really is just too big to be told any other way.  In this series I wrestled with some big themes, like the Manifestations of prophecy, and belief, both in ourselves and in others.  What exactly fuels that belief?  Proof for most of us is subjective at best, don’t you think? All this is set against a galaxy shattered by a decade’s long war and the politics that drives the beast of human conflict.  What if you had been told all the days of your life that you were destined to be the savior of the galaxy and the older you got the more you doubted everyone around you.  You doubt yourself even.  Marcus, the main character is struggling with this very thing.  His story alone could not be contained in three hundred pages, not even four hundred I suspect.  But rest assured over the course of the series we do eventually get to the bottom of it.  We also get to the bottom of Haughn and Princess Aurora’s love story.  We also see how Dane Torrek puts his own plans in motion.

This first novel is exactly as it says, ‘an introduction’, a rock thrown into a pond.  The story rides on the ripples.  I intended it to be your introduction to this galaxy, present to you the background of the story, and introduce you to some of the main characters complete with what drives them to do the things they do. Money, love, power, revenge, not everyone wants to be a hero, or do the right thing even.  By the time you reach the end of ‘A Father’s Legacy’, you should have a fairly good idea what makes them tick as people trying to move and exist in their worlds. Each one of them rides the ripples in a different way, each hoping for different results.  The cliff hanger ending was entirely done on purpose, as was front loading the novel.

In the second novel, ‘The Stone Empress’, our characters, by now your friends, will be questing for the secrets they found under the statue of Bichon DaVue.   The war will intensify, and the young Emperor will assume his thrown and begin his own quest to find and kill the man he believes killed his father.  Marcus will continue to struggle with his identity and reluctantly agrees to take his sister Princess Aurora under his wing, and the marriage is put off by circumstances out of Haughn’s control.

 

 

 

4Q: We see that, like many other authors, you are offering A Father’s Legacy, as an audiobook as well. Tell us about this experience.

 



JS: All my work has been turned into audible books. I can think of no other way that I would want my work showcased. I have a profound and deep love for the written word spoken aloud. This I think goes back to my grade nine English teacher, Mrs. Thomas. She would read to us, the whole class, for hours. I loved every minute of it! So, all you guys and dolls who love my audio books, you can blame her, 😊as far as my own work in audio format, the experience has been nothing short of wonderful! To hear the words, you have written come to life has got to be one of the best drugs ever. I would recommend this to all my author buddies, and have to many of them, lol. Seriously the experience will be dependent on the voice acter or actress you work with and I have been lucky enough to have worked with two incredibly talented voice actresses in the past couple of years. Nora Agha is the voice of the Secrets of the Damned series. Let me tell you she is dynamite! Those of you who have had the pleasure to listen to her work know exactly what I mean when I say, WOW. She literally left me thunderstruck from the first chapter till the last one. It is my greatest hope that when the third Secrets of the Damned is completed, she will be available to bring it to life. Kiera Bowie is the voice for the Legends of the Seventh Son series, and we have recently completed the first novel, A Father’s Legacy, in audio format and like the Secrets of the Damned, it will also be available on Audible.com. If you ask me if lighting can strike a person more than once, I will have to say YES. This gal has managed to bring my most imaginative series to life, in such a spectacular way, that I find myself wanting to write more so I can hear more. There is a criterion for how I want to hear my work, simply put I want an actress who is expressive, and all I can say is I have gotten that in spades! Kiera Bowie is not only an exceptionally talented voice actress, but she also is a more conventional actress as well and is full of passion for everything she does, as a result, she is a very busy girl, and I was most fortunate to have gotten her at all.(Should have bought a lotto ticket that day)

 

 

 

4Q: In your opinion, what makes a story great?

 

 

JS: For me, a great story is one that ensnares the reader and holds him or her captive rendering them as helpless as a fly in a spider’s web, until that last page has been turned and the last word read.

 

 

 

4Q: Favorite authors and/or novels?

 

JS: Funny jimfact, growing up I was never one for reading novels. My nose was always stuck in a history text, reading about the rise and fall of the many great empires of antiquity. It is how my imagination developed. As a kid, reading history texts and my Lego sets kept me busy reliving the far away battles I experienced on the pages of those dusty old books. It was not till later in my life, say my mid-twenties that I decided to read novels, and the first series I tackled was the Dune series, written by Frank Herbert. This is my favorite; I am so amazed that this man Frank Herbert created such a complete universe all by himself. 




A lot of contemporary Sci-Fi is the result of a team of writers combining their imaginations to create the different plot lines, characters, and the worlds they live in. Others who I admire, and love are Stephen King, the sheer volume this man has penned is incredible on its own, add to that his stories are of the highest quality and the stories are fantastic. When folks say he is a master, they are not exaggerating. Peter Benchley would round out my top three. Seriously who doesn’t love Jaws? This one novel had a lasting effect on how millions of folks all over the world view our oceans. But just like the other two on my list Mr. Benchley wasn’t a one hit wonder. His novels Beast and White Shark proved that he was the king of the deep blue sea.

 

 

4Q: Anything else you’d like to share with us?

 

JS: This maybe the hardest question of them all. Only that I am grateful for the opportunity to get to share this fantastic space with you and all your wonderful readers. Thank you it means a great deal to me.

 

*** The Scribbler is most happy to have you on board Jim.

 

 

 

 

An Excerpt from A Father’s Legacy.

(Copyright is held by the author. Used with Permission)

 

 

He drew his star sword and hit the door release, and as confidently as he could he crossed the threshold and entered the battle station’s throne room.  It was quite possibly the largest room he had ever seen, and although he had never been there before, it was strangely familiar to him.  It was exactly like the sacred courtyard on Therorie, complete with the cherry trees and the many fountains that lined its gardens.  As hard as he tried, he couldn’t see to the other side or detect any walls of any kind.

The gravel crunched under foot as he marched deeper into the huge room.  In the distance he saw the slender figure of a woman, dressed in flowing robes of pale blue and shimmering white, star sword in hand confidently beckoning to him.

In a sweet voice he heard her say, “Lord Admiral we have a guest.”

His father the Lord Admiral Vendredii stepped out from amongst the cherry trees lining the courtyard.

The Empress regarded him for a moment, studying him as he walked towards them.  “A musketeer no less, look Admiral, I haven’t seen that insignia in a very long time,” she said.

Marcus had stopped after only advancing halfway across the courtyard.  He stood there motionless, studying every detail of his father.  He had never been this close to the man.

The Empress raised her sword and pointed at him.  “Your Master should have taught you that it is rude to enter a room with your star sword drawn, unless you intend to use it.”

He made no reply; instead, he held his star sword high above his head with a strong two-handed grip.

Her fierce eyes burned into him.  “Should I take your stance as reply?”

In his mind he was running through every conceivable attack she could launch at him, and the appropriate counter he would use in reply.

“Lord Admiral Vendredii,” she said, momentarily looking at his father.

The man stood to attention and bowed his head.  “Yes, your majesty.”

“I will dispatch with this pup in five moves or less,” she predicted. She returned her cruel attention back onto Marcus.  Her fierce eyes had darkened to almost black.

Marcus inched closer to the Empress, his muscles tense like tightly wound springs waiting to be sprung into action.  In his mind he could hear Master Durh’s voice telling him this was the all-important battle before the battle, the time when victory or defeat is decided.

Empress Bichon DaVue took a bold step forward, smiling at her challenger.  “Do you like my throne room young pup?”  She raised her free hand and gestured indicating their surroundings.

Marcus looked around the room but remained silent.

She smiled reading his expression.  “Yes, it not only looks familiar to you, it is exactly like the courtyard where you train on Theorie.”

He knew exactly what she was trying to do, and it was not going to work.  He would not allow himself to become distracted.  He was aware that as she spoke, she was slowly closing to within striking distance.  He took a step backward, smiled at her, then looked at his father.  “This courtyard is sacred to our order and kept secret to outsiders for a reason.”

“Do not blame the Lord Admiral for revealing its location to me.  I too, trained under the great Master Zenn Durh.  I was his greatest pupil, and I warned him, about training anyone else.  I told him what the consequences of those actions would be, and yet, here you are.”  She looked at the Lord Admiral, “This pup should be dead along with the other two.”

Marcus squeezed the hilt of his star sword.  “I should be what?  What other two?”

“You don’t know do you pup?”

“Know what?”

“Three days ago, I dispatched three squads of my most lethal Vashek assassins to your secret planet.  By now you are the last of the Musketeers.”

Marcus laughed.  “It is doubtful that any of us in this room could best either one of those men in one on one combat, let alone mere soldiers of the secret police.”

“One on one combat,” the Empress shook her head.  “Only a fool would challenge Master Durh or Steller Falswell to a dual.  I assure you pup, these men, these mere soldiers as you call them are not fools, and your mentors are dead, as dead as you will be shortly.”

Marcus shook his head.  He was about to disagree with her when shiver shot up his spine and then another and the hairs on the back of his neck stood up.  His stomach churned and his head began to swim.  It was true, what she said was true and he could feel it.

The Empress sensed the imbalance growing inside him, sensed her chance to strike.  She sprang into action launching a blistery attack, swinging her sword horizontally at his throat, as she did her dress twirled and snapped behind her.

Surprised as much as startled by her speed, Marcus jumped backward, her blade narrowly missed him.  He landed awkwardly and stumbled to one knee.  Seeing this, the Empress pressed her attack, whipping her sword again hard at his chest.

He tried to counter, but it was already too late.  He felt the Empress’ blade cut cleanly through his tunic and bite hard into his chest.  Fire shot through him when the star sword scraped across his ribs as she brought her blade down to the floor.  The insignia he had proudly worn fell to the rocks with a tang.  All the strength went from his legs and he fell, landing flat on his back next to gold and silver pin.

Ignoring the pain as best he could, he scrambled to his feet and whirled around slashing at her with his sword.  He hoped it would back her off and give him enough time to recover his wits and reset his stance.

 She merely regarded him with the briefest of smiles, then lunged at him again, her blood-stained blade held aloft.  She brought her star sword down onto him at the exact same time she landed, feet flat, knees bent in a strong stance, adding more power to her cutting stroke.

He countered her attack and deflected her blade off to the side.  It hit the ground hard, clanging into the rocks, causing sparks to fly in all directions.

He looked at her blade, remembering Master Durh’s words, “It would take some doing to break a star sword.”

The Empress quickly stepped back and brought her sword up and in one fluid motion she hooked his blade in her guard, wrenched it from his hand and flipped it into the air.  Before his sword could hit the ground, she repositioned herself by stepping forward and then swung, hitting his star sword mid blade, neatly cutting it in half, sending both halves bouncing in opposite directions.

Shock and surprise shot through Marcus’ mind.  My sword, it is broken!  He could not believe it.  Once more his master’s words echoed throughout his mind.  Consumed by the sight of his broken blade, he ignored the Empress and the threat she represented. He reached for what was left of the sword.  He almost had it before she kicked him hard between his shoulder blades.  Her kick knocked the wind out of him, sending him face first into the rocks.

Gasping for air, he rolled over to see the cruel faced Empress standing over him.  She smiled.  “Four moves, five if we count the killing blow,” she said triumphantly.  She wiped the blood off her sword and took a step toward the fallen musketeer.

“No majesty, he is my son.”

“Your son, I think would have more teeth.  This pup; is a waste of your seed.”

 Vendredii took a step closer.  “You can’t kill him; he is the Promised One.”

“Keep your place, Lord Admiral!”

The cruel faced Empress looked down at her vanquished opponent.  “You can’t be the Promised One.  You fell far too easily to be the savior of the galaxy.”

She held her sword high above her head.  “Now I ask you, pup.  Who will save you?  Who will save the savior of the galaxy?”

Marcus closed his eyes; he braced himself for the end and hoped it would be swift and painless.

“I will,” the Lord Admiral said, stepping forward he brought his sword up to block his Empress’ blade.

 

 

 

 

Thank you, Jim, for being our featured guest this week. All the best with your new series and your writing journey.

 

 

For you readers wanting more information on James A Shaw and his novels, please follow these links:




(Legends of the Seventh Son: A Father's Legacy) https://www.amazon.ca/Legends-Seventh-Son-Fathers-Legacy/dp/1701696444/ref=sr_1_1?dchild=1&keywords=a+father%27s+legacy+by+jim+a+shaw&qid=1595894854&sr=8-1 

(The Kirk: Book One in "The Secrets Of The Damned" Series) https://www.amazon.ca/Kirk-Book-One-Secrets-Damned/dp/1986454649/ref=sr_1_1?dchild=1&keywords=secrets+of+the+damned+by+jim+shaw&qid=1595895282&sr=8-1