It's a wonderful day to have Ann back on the Scribbler. This is her second visit and she talks about the craft of writing. A special treat awaits you, dear reader, as she shares an excerpt from her latest work, Nightshade.
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It’s
a tough call, being an artist. It’s like chasing the rabbit down
the rabbit hole, into the unknown. We’re not so afraid of what
we’ll find; rather we are afraid of what we might never find. We
race against ourselves though we don’t always realize it. We are
our own competition. How much deeper does that rabbit hole go? How
close can we get to that rabbit? At any point, we could stop chasing
the rabbit; turn around; change direction. But we don’t. We’re
compelled. Driven. We’re driven to succeed – to create something
– to catch the prize.
It
works like this…
Writing
demands a lot of time, commitment, energy, and an open mind. Defining
your craft is not an easy task; perhaps there is no real need to
define it, but only to accept it for what it is. One word at a time,
one page at a time, a story is born.
As
the author, there are times when I am creating the story, but there
are also times when the story is creating itself and I am simply
jotting the events down on the page as I see/hear them. Achieving
complete emotional identification with the story and one or more
characters is my ultimate goal. This allows me to immerse myself into
a strong, imaginative storyline. Accomplishing this ‘triggers’ my
commitment to the project.
There
are characters that become an extension of you, and this is
especially true about (the character of) Darion Rhys. This journey,
writing this series, has been profound and empowering. Darion and I
have been through a lot together. Conflict is an important subject in
literature. The Rising series explores themes such as identity
crisis, authority and control, rebellion, and love.
Darion
was trained to be a soldier. She was raised to follow rules and to
comply with those in power. She’s never had full control over her
life. She is sixteen in the first book, a sensitive time in life when
raging teenage hormones begin to disrupt our views and opinions about
life, love, and identity. She questions not only the social order,
but the intentions of those around her as well. Darion is on a wild
emotional roller coaster, and it ultimately strengthens and defines
her sense of self.
The
series also looks at the subtleties involved around love triangles.
There are three young men in Darion’s life–one she loves dearly;
one who loves her dearly; and one who has and represents everything a
young lady should be in love with—money, influence, power. Given
her situation, does Darion have the right to fall in love?
Enjoy
this sample from the newest book in the series, Nightshade. A series
of events has placed Darion exactly where her family wanted her—in
a position of influence. But this has also placed her in the clutches
of the Rothwell family, and specifically, on the arm of the youngest
heir, Johnny. After her new title was announced to the world, her
rebel family moved in and rescued her from the Rothwell mansion. She
can be safe now—but for how long?
Ann
Knight books can be ordered by visiting: annknightfiction.com.
An excerpt. (copyright is held by the author. Used with permission)
1
FREE
AT LAST
Dark
black billows of smoke choke the sky. This is my first taste of
freedom in a long time and I’m not sad that it is cutting into my
honeymoon. I didn’t want to marry Johnny. I didn’t want to become
Mrs. Rothwell. Sitting in the back of the helicopter, I feel both
grateful and eager to be heading far away from the craziness that has
held me captive for so long. My father rescued me from the Rothwell
mansion right on time. He couldn’t get me out of there fast enough.
I thought I was going to be doomed forever—Johnny’s wife—but
his prisoner in reality.
The
helicopter is flying over the mountains and I can see the destruction
below us with my own eyes now. Wide pockets of fire incinerate the
forest, devouring the beautiful green space that rebels call home. It
won’t be long before the fire wastes it all. Soon there won’t be
anything left. It breaks my heart. The helicopter veers right, making
my stomach roll. The overhead thrumming of the blades is deafening.
I’m sitting beside another rebel across from my father and a second
rebel that I don’t recognize. My dad’s steel-blue eyes find me,
and even in the dark, I can see the concern and agitation behind
them. I draw in a deep breath, relieved that he came to rescue me in
person. Any other man would have sent someone else to do the job, but
my father would rather have died than to do that. It’s in his
expression now—a dad’s determination and love.
Uncle
John is flying the chopper and though he’s keeping it steady, I’m
still feeling queasy. Maybe that’s because I’ve just been plucked
out of my so-called life for the umpteenth time now. Hopefully this
time I’ll get to stay with my family for good because it’s
annoying to keep going back and forth like this. In one life I get
freedom, in the other confinement. I’d rather a slice of freedom on
any day.
“We’ve
got company!” Uncle John shouts.
“At
least we got a head start!” my father calls back.
I
can see them now. The two black specs in the distance are twin
Gunship Helicopters. They are used by law enforcement in combat
situations and are equipped with AEP’s – Anti-Electronic Pulse
magnets that can send us down pretty quick. We’re in a standard
Squirrel helicopter—it’s light and acrobatic, but it has no
weapon system on board.
“Find
a place to land,” my father instructs, “before they shoot us
down!”
The
chopper veers sharply and I grab onto the side cable until we
straighten out again. I don’t know how we’re going to land in
this mess. We’re cutting through swells of thick black smoke and
it’s wafting into the back of the chopper, choking us. My father
reaches over and pulls the front of my sweater up over my mouth and
nose.
“Brace
yourselves!” Uncle John yells, taking us into a momentary nosedive.
The landing is harsh but it isn’t technically a crash. Uncle John
has flown just about everything and he’s a pro with emergency
landings. Our chopper plummets towards the ground and swooshes
upwards at the last minute. The maneuver catches an updraft and we
hover for a few seconds before we ‘fall’ into park like a toy
drone in the hands of an expert tech. As soon as the landing skids
hit the ground, everyone bails. My father takes my arm and we jump
out after everyone else, meeting Uncle John around the side.
“They’re
here!” Uncle John shouts over the slowing rotors. The two Gunships
have us in sight. We run in the direction of the trees as the
helicopters come down to land next to ours. The tree branches whip me
in the face. I readjust the hoodie on my sweater, losing my balance
as my foot sinks into a patch of softer ground. My sandal snags an
exposed root and I trip, falling face-first on the ground. Pulling my
legs into my chest, I grab my foot and bite down on my lower lip as
pain shoots up my leg.
“Darion,”
my father’s hands are on my shoulders.
“I’m
good,” I strain, getting to my feet. My hands are sticky. I realize
that my foot is bleeding but it’s too dark to make out the wound.
My father wraps his strong arms around me and picks me up. “Dad,
I’m fine!” I protest, but it does no good. He must sense that
something is wrong. He keeps moving with me in his arms and I lay my
head on his shoulder. I’m slowing him down but he doesn’t care.
Rustling footsteps up ahead quicken their pace. We’re following the
sounds made by those ahead of us because it’s too dark to make out
much more than shadows. At least we’re heading in the opposite
direction of the forest fire, though I can still smell the smoke. My
father weaves us around scrubs and bushes so easily. He knows this
landscape like the back of his hand.
“Michael?”
Uncle John calls. “Mike!”
“Over
here!” my dad calls back.
They
catch up and the two other rebels stand next to me as they adjust
their gear. “Can you hear the waterfall?” Uncle John asks,
adding, “The safe house is just over the next ridge.”
“I
hear it.” I nod.
“Michael,
we only have a day before that fire reaches us. Judging by the wind—”
“I
know,” my father cuts him off. “Let’s just get there.” He
sets me down and we start climbing. “Can you walk?”
“Yes,”
I answer.
“Detectives
have combed these woods for at least four months now. They’ve dug
holes and set traps. Many rebels have already been caught. I want you
to be careful.” He nudges me ahead of him and I grope my way around
in the dark, pulling myself up the sloping hillside using every
available branch and root. My foot is stinging. My toes are caked
with mud and grass and I can barely move them.
My
father climbs ahead of me, grabs the back of my sweater, and hauls me
up on top of the ridge. We are about halfway up the mountain. The
moon is full and the sky is like a black chalkboard—completely
starless. Swelling clouds of smoke are slowly drifting towards the
moon, reminding us that the fire is spreading and that we have to
move if we want to survive.
“Do
you see that space between the canopy layers over there?” he asks,
pointing to the area in the distance.
“I
see it.”
“It’s
a small lake where all the streams converge. It’s the only lake
this high up into the mountain. The safe house is just beyond it.”
We
start down the other side of the ridge. My father is completely adept
in this environment but I’m totally exhausted, and by the time we
reach level ground I stumble and fall to my knees.
“I
got you,” my father says, scooping me off the ground.
“Give
her to me,” my uncle tells him. “Hand her over.”
I
feel like a puppet as they pass me around. My uncle puts me over his
shoulder. We start moving and my eyelids get heavy. It’s the lack
of food, I think to myself as I give in and my eyes shut out the
world.
She’s
drained Michael.” I hear my uncle say. It takes a minute for my
vision to adjust after I open my eyes. It’s dawn. The forest is
dull and dim, but I can tell that it’s the start of a new day
because orange beams of light are spearing through the canopy of
leaves over my head.
“She
needs to eat something,” my father says. “We have to get her
inside.”
Inside.
I turn my head towards a man-made cave opening. Camouflage netting is
draped around the mouth in the rock. The cover is so good it would be
impossible to see from overhead.
“We’re
here Darion.” My uncle’s expression is tight, and I can tell that
he’s worried. “You’re finally home.”
I
sit up, rubbing my head. “Smells like something’s… burning?”
My
father’s lips tug down into a frown. “The fire will reach us in a
day or two, depending on the wind.”
A
sense of foreboding overtakes me. Something feels wrong. I take a
quick glance down at my arms and then pull my jeans up to inspect my
legs. I have no puncture wound, no reason to suspect that I’ve been
injected with a trace.
“What
is it?” my uncle asks.
“They
can’t just let me go—it can’t be this easy.”
“Easy?”
He makes a face. “Glad you thought that was easy.”
What a terrific beginning Ann. This is a story I look forward to reading. Thank you being our guest and sharing the excerpt with us
I really enjoyed this series. It’s a great storyline with a few characters you love to hate! And you can see that the author’s writing ‘’grows up’’ along with Darion through the 3 books, which was cool to see. I reallly hope to see more from this author in the future.
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