Scarlet's Escape
Wow! What a ride. Ever since I have pressed the publish button on my first book ‘Jayden & the Mysterious Mountain’ on September 2nd, 2013, I have learnt so much about the publishing industry, indie and mainstream (with still a lot more to learn). I learnt from my mistakes and worked on fixing them making sure not to do them again for the next release of ‘The Sanctum Series’. This is the whole reason why the 2nd book ‘Scarlet’s Escape’ took so long to release after the first.
I started with no history, no contacts and not knowing anything about the whole industry. You have a great original story with lots of emotion, characters, and twisted plots not to mention a nice cover – it’s going to take off all by itself, right? Ha, ha! No, I wasn’t that naive but I had a long way to go.
I am delighted that as my first book reaches more people I am starting to have more people like my work and they are keen for the next stage in the series.
I have also had the honour of receiving a 5 star rating from Readers’ Favorite reviewer Dinorah Blackman for the Preteen category and it is now posted on their site: https://readersfavorite.com/book-review/26767
Copyright belongs to the author. Used by permission.
When they entered, they were astounded by the amount of weapons in
that one building. It was like a huge gun closet where the collector had gone
mad. There was every kind of gun and rifle, many more than the two boys had
ever seen before. Further inside there were grenades, missiles and boxes and
boxes of explosives.
“Alpha?” Jayden spoke over the communicator.
“Copy contender.” Avando’s voice sounded over Jayden’s headset.
“Can you see this?” Jayden asked him in shock.
“Yes, I can. Unfortunately, it is as I had suspected. I will need you
to destroy it.” Avando told him.
“Destroy it?” Jayden queried in surprise.
“Yes, this is why you have been sent in. It is a great danger to our
people.”
“Copy,” Jayden responded getting over his initial disbelief. “How would
you like us to do that?”
“Well, looking at all those explosives, the best way would be to blow
it up.”
“Really?” Jayden was surprised.
“Yes! There is too much to be able to do anything else.” Avando
confirmed.
“Copy Alpha.” Jayden set to work with Aaron’s help.
They began to work, rigging all of the explosives and setting them
all ready to blow in five minutes. Then they prepared to leave in haste,
heading for the main door. They peered out the window near the door and as they
went to open it, they realised that it also needed a code to exit from the
inside.
“What?” Jayden said out loud involuntarily. “Who puts a security lock
on a room from the inside?” His voice started to tighten in panic. “Aaahhh!
Puzzler?”
“Copy.” Eva’s voice sounded over the headphones.
“We need a code and we need it now!” Jayden started showing a slight
panic.
“Just try the code that you entered last for getting in,” she stated
like it was obvious.
“What was that?” he urged.
“C59835,” she advised.
He entered the code but found that it didn’t work. “No good Puzzler,”
he said as dread filled his voice.
“Ahhh! Okay!” she sounded surprised. “Show me the pad and I’ll set to
work.”
Jayden showed her the pad so that she could copy it and get to work
on the code. “Be quick, puzzler. We only have four and a half minutes left to
get out in one piece.”
“Copy,” she said and went silently to work. At four minutes left Eva
spoke. “Try these…” and she rattled off several different codes, which Jayden
entered quickly, but with no success.
“No good puzzler. Give us some more, please.” His voice was even
tighter with tension now.
“Copy,” she said and silently went to work again. At three and a half
minutes left, her voice came over the headset again. “Right try these,” she
said and ran through several more codes, again with no success.
“We need more quickly,” Jayden almost screamed at her. The sweat from
the stress was starting to run down his face. He wiped it away with his sleeve
and looked at Aaron anxiously, only to see his emotions mirrored in Aaron’s
face. To make matters worse, the security alarm had set off from not having the
correct code put into the system before the required time. Terror crossed both
boys’ faces at the same instant. “Now puzzler. We need the good code now!” He
was yelling both from panic and the need to be heard over the alarm.
A few seconds later Eva’s voice sounded over the headset. “Right try
these ….” She called out a few more, finally with success. The light turned
green and the alarm stopped, with only two and a half minutes remaining to get
far away from the building and out of harm’s way.
They opened the door to see that there were soldiers running in their
direction. They both glanced at each other with a look of dread crossing their
faces, but they had no choice left now other than to make a dash for it, out
the door in full view of the soldiers. Immediately they heard voices yelling at
them, then shooting, and next they heard bullets hitting the building behind
them. They continued to run to the side of the building from where they had
come from, but they were not so lucky as to be able to make it.
It all happened so fast. Jayden felt himself falling forward to the
ground. No matter how hard he tried he could not get up. He started to crawl
forward in the direction they were planning to go. He glanced around quickly to
see how Aaron was doing and saw that he was also crawling along the ground.
‘Great,’ he thought sarcastically, ‘that’s not going to help us get out of here
quickly!’ They both picked up their rifles and started shooting back at the
soldiers, which slowed their advancement after them. Aaron and Jayden continued
to crawl. Their progress was annoyingly slow and the soldiers started
aggressively coming at them again. So they were forced to start shooting back,
slowing them down yet again. When they retaliated enough to deter them, they
continued crawling towards their exit. Jayden glanced at his watch. To his
horror he saw there was only thirty seconds left.
“Contender!” Avando’s voice came over the headset. “You really need
to hurry, as you are still in the danger zone.”
Jayden didn’t respond but continued moving as fast as he could with
Aaron in close pursuit.
Fifteen seconds. “Come on contender!” Avando almost shrieked over the
headset.
They were already going as fast as they could, so all that they could
do was to continue on at that speed. Ten seconds … five … then it happened. One
brilliant flash accompanied by a large whoosh, which flooded over them.
“Contender?” Avando spoke over the communicator. “Contender?” Urgency
now pierced his voice. “Come in Contender! Contender?” Nothing. Silence
followed Avando’s voice.
Thank you Katrina for sharing this excerpt from your novel. Please visit Katrina's website for more information on this keen author and her novels. http://katrenee11.wix.com/katrina-cope-author
Please visit again on Friday, March 13th and read an excerpt from my second novel - The Wall of War. A tale of Incan gold. I am presently completing the second draft with hopes of having a completed novel by Fall, 2015.
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